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Sabatino
9/18/2018 08:49:05 am
This blog post provides description, action, and dialogue to set a scene. Also, you are a clear participant in the moment. I wonder how we could review this piece for present and past tense usage?
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Colin
9/24/2018 08:16:06 pm
I really liked how you described the stem building and how busy and is filled with lots of conversations.
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nymahlee
9/25/2018 08:42:42 am
Good scene. I can relate to this scene so much because i done this before
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